Unnamed for now
One lived amongst the heavenly bodies,
One lived amongst their family in a belt.
One was misguided—mistaken. They believed
That their family should remain closer together,
A unit.
One was unwise. They did not remember
That they had not the power to control.
Their family listened all at once, a unit
But not to them.
They weren’t the ________,
They weren’t Gravity.
A couple of family members wanted to listen,
They liked this one.
It was all unwise.
The _______—the lead,
________ was upset at the one’s decision,
But also, happy that the one tried.
Therefore, _______ gave the one their own area.
One was horrified as they were pushed of the Belt,
Quite indeed.
The spheroid they came across—a waterworld at the moment
One fell through the sky losing mass and the little protection they had.
There they laid sinking into the water,
Until they reached the bottom.
Pain.
One lost their consciousness,
But gained control.
I will update more on this later
5 replies on “Draft”
Wow, really loved the poem. I could really feel the emotional ups and downs.
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Thank you so much.
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You’re very welcome.
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Oh, I really like the imagery here.
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Thank you!
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